Стихи... из раннего... и не только...
Додано: 12 жовтня 2010 16:15
Всем привет!
Впервые на данном форуме и сразу за творчество.
Размещаю немного своих произведений на ваше раскритикование )))
Если кому понравится и кто захочет, может смело брать их в работу.
Хотелось бы услышать данные произведения в муз. сопровождении.
Спасибо.
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Pride
Let me ask you one thing have you ever been hurt and
I know what you’ll say there was a hurt of a loving
You didn’t know what to do you wanted to step aside
‘Cause it’s so hard to get through than just lay down and die
And you exist with a pain that’s deep inside of your soul
And you see no one to blame for causing you such a sorrow
But someone plays with your heart just like a child plays with kite
But you don’t want to give up because of your f*cking pride
Sometimes in sometimes out
You’re going through the pride
You’re going through the pride
You’re going to be proud
Sometimes out sometimes in
You want to give it up
You want to give it up
You want to give it in
She proposed you to be just a brother or friend
Well you would do anything if she were your only girlfriend
But there is no need to hide, man, that she doesn’t love you
So you still fighting your pride oh that’s a hard thing to do
You cannot sleep in the night you cannot walk in the day
You hope that you’ll see the light and she will do it your way
But now your mind and you love are seamy side of your life
And you don’t want to break up because of your f*cking pride
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RainMan
You’re staying by the window and trying to look through
You’re searching for a hero who hides inside of you
You see your own reflection is running right to stray
You’re done with her affection you’re waiting for the rain
The time is running faster you don’t know what it takes
Sometimes you think you’re laughter who laughs at someone’s face
That dream is never ending you won’t wake up again
To know that you are standing and living in the rain and loving just the rain
Don’t you know that you are the rain man
Waiting for the rain to come
Can’t you see your life is a raindrop
You won’t let the sun shine it down… on you
The clouds are your saviors they dim the morning light
You tell yourself the fables that you could stop the night
You feel that something special you cannot just explain
Your only great temptation is being in the rain, existing in the rain
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Nothing But Pain. Боль
Strike a match and light the way through the dark of soul
Colour night into bright day just don’t feel her gone
Hide your sorrow in your heart, let it be the grave
For the ones who’s torn apart till the end of days
When you love and do it again and again
Nothing can break through your heart but pain
Burn your dreams from dusk to dawn, mix the ash with dust
Maybe she is still the one though she’s not the last
Go ahead and don’t look back, every move is life
If you keep it on your track you will stay alive
Освети души потемки сальною свечей,
И разлейся на осколки желтою листвой
Сохрани страданье в сердце тем, кто всех нежней,
Кто уже не будет вместе до скончания дней
Если любишь и любишь и любишь и любишь как сам не свой
Ничего не пройдет сквозь сердце, только самая острая боль
Жги мечты в кострах надежд, пепла и золы
Знай, что не найдешь ответ, как избежать судьбы
Новый день как первый шаг, а каждый шаг есть жизнь
Может это и не так уж плохо быть одним
Впервые на данном форуме и сразу за творчество.
Размещаю немного своих произведений на ваше раскритикование )))
Если кому понравится и кто захочет, может смело брать их в работу.
Хотелось бы услышать данные произведения в муз. сопровождении.
Спасибо.
_________________________________________________________
Pride
Let me ask you one thing have you ever been hurt and
I know what you’ll say there was a hurt of a loving
You didn’t know what to do you wanted to step aside
‘Cause it’s so hard to get through than just lay down and die
And you exist with a pain that’s deep inside of your soul
And you see no one to blame for causing you such a sorrow
But someone plays with your heart just like a child plays with kite
But you don’t want to give up because of your f*cking pride
Sometimes in sometimes out
You’re going through the pride
You’re going through the pride
You’re going to be proud
Sometimes out sometimes in
You want to give it up
You want to give it up
You want to give it in
She proposed you to be just a brother or friend
Well you would do anything if she were your only girlfriend
But there is no need to hide, man, that she doesn’t love you
So you still fighting your pride oh that’s a hard thing to do
You cannot sleep in the night you cannot walk in the day
You hope that you’ll see the light and she will do it your way
But now your mind and you love are seamy side of your life
And you don’t want to break up because of your f*cking pride
___________________________________________________________
RainMan
You’re staying by the window and trying to look through
You’re searching for a hero who hides inside of you
You see your own reflection is running right to stray
You’re done with her affection you’re waiting for the rain
The time is running faster you don’t know what it takes
Sometimes you think you’re laughter who laughs at someone’s face
That dream is never ending you won’t wake up again
To know that you are standing and living in the rain and loving just the rain
Don’t you know that you are the rain man
Waiting for the rain to come
Can’t you see your life is a raindrop
You won’t let the sun shine it down… on you
The clouds are your saviors they dim the morning light
You tell yourself the fables that you could stop the night
You feel that something special you cannot just explain
Your only great temptation is being in the rain, existing in the rain
________________________________________________________________
Nothing But Pain. Боль
Strike a match and light the way through the dark of soul
Colour night into bright day just don’t feel her gone
Hide your sorrow in your heart, let it be the grave
For the ones who’s torn apart till the end of days
When you love and do it again and again
Nothing can break through your heart but pain
Burn your dreams from dusk to dawn, mix the ash with dust
Maybe she is still the one though she’s not the last
Go ahead and don’t look back, every move is life
If you keep it on your track you will stay alive
Освети души потемки сальною свечей,
И разлейся на осколки желтою листвой
Сохрани страданье в сердце тем, кто всех нежней,
Кто уже не будет вместе до скончания дней
Если любишь и любишь и любишь и любишь как сам не свой
Ничего не пройдет сквозь сердце, только самая острая боль
Жги мечты в кострах надежд, пепла и золы
Знай, что не найдешь ответ, как избежать судьбы
Новый день как первый шаг, а каждый шаг есть жизнь
Может это и не так уж плохо быть одним